this was alright
tbh the animation and sounds where actually quite good. but i think you dont give yourself enough credit. also i dont think you should be posting up paragraphs of how much you hate it, its kind of almost vouching. no offense. i think it was exactly what it was meant to be. an animated joke with a hilarious punchline. and if done any other way, i dont see it being any better. you did good man! be confident about your art. your better than a lot of people. me for instance. if your better than me but crap that means i am attrocious lol. make more! you obviously know what your doing!
:D:D:D take care and keep improving :D:D:D thanks