this was nice!
i felt the writing had unnecesarily lengthened parts, parts that did not develope a character or direct the movie at all...it rather just focused on adding feed time to the animationi didnt really establish much connection with the characters, and didnt find it had a very absorbing story...
however, you CLEARLY earned yourself a 10 both of you. because the animation was actually pretty outstanding, and the voices where lovely. granted the voices came across a little samey in range, but either way very well acted! this was good to watch due to the lovely voice acting and well done graphics. as i say again though, you should work on script writing, a good script would be good without animation. if its not good enough on its own, it is rare for it to be well compensated for in art and performance. in this case, it is the exception! congrats gaia on your first va sub! :D WOOT WOOT! and well done my friend for your wonderful art skills :D