Stalagmite's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Walking in the Woods]

right LOL.

LOL. no problem matey! right, that instrument, koto, sitar? cant put my finger on it. but it is possibly overpowering.... rather than moving the piece along with its presence, it dominates and forces the tune out somehow..... may i suggest a velocity change in that instrument, adding texture and variety to this instrument makes it moody and more realistic. the flute loop is fine. very dry and windy. LOL. duh. i love that unusual delay type effect on the flute.. really dreamy. may i suggest a second flute harmony to be added in near the middle? just a little quiter bit added on with the regular flute melody...
Also a gentle layer of wind effects may help the piece to "drift".

Also you could add extra layers to it. help it establish a thickness. it is not quite "whole". certainly add extra strings or synth. in terms of structure, you already have what is required. your theme, your mood, your instruments, your genre and style. I have merely suggested ways to improve it to push it further. Considering it is for a game, i should not be so brash and deep about it.
i have tried to be as polite as i can. I really treasure honest people on NG, especially one who has helped me so much! LOL. so if i offend you please GOD tell me!
now. to set it straight... I have merely suggested what "i" would do to make this song more than it currently is. The song itself is really good. Like i said. everything you have is fine! nothing out of key or anything. for a game, i would keep it as it is. Only if you wanted to push this piece further would you follow some advice. I hope i have not upset you, hope i havent blabbed on, and hope i have given you what you wanted. :D:D:D take care.
i am off to the year 4050. to watch the queen of englands head be reanimated. :D:D:D

SFaPiL2 responds:

First of all, thank you very much for the suggestions. I'll give them a try (to the best of my capabilities). I hope I'll come up with some interesting new layers.

Second thing:
"i have tried to be as polite as i can"
lol... you should know better ;o). You don't have to be diplomatic with me. If something sucks just say "hey, that melody sucks" or "stop making music, my ears are bleeding" (etc.)

I don't get offended with honest opinions (or, quite frankly, try my best not to) since all they're doing is making me learn from my mistakes.

Thank you once more for helping me out Stalagmite. Much appreciated.

Cheers

[Taking Out my Anger on NG]

anger.

if you made this instrument sound. well done. You have demonstrated clearly your ability to create the emotion that is anger, very well. however it is not used in the best context. take your anger out. but instead of just noise....Try enforcing emotions in a musical way that teaches us something, or that we can relate to. at least use this in a song or riff.
The idea is their. and you put it across well. However i did not much care for jumping out of my seat LOL.
take care and learn to channel your anger in less aggresive manners.
goodbye. :D P.S. you deserve some stars to cheer you up!
I care!

GoldbloodedDragon responds:

Oh, thank you so much for the 10! It helped!

I'll also try to vent my anger i different ways, like making stupid songs, not spam.

[hentai]

i think your great!

you are a smart voice actor! up their with the NG stars LOL. if only we could all be as popular LOL.
nice song. funny. clearly about spoons... and hentai. very funny. I have not seen any hentai. but it sounds so appealing now LOL.
Thanks alot for this last laugh before i go to bed! :D:D:D
Stalagmite,

vago187 responds:

XD thanks man, that's what I'm here for. Making the world laugh before it goes to bed.

[[DF] My Neighbor Totoro]

OMG! do POM POKO! that organ one!

i love this. totoro makes me cry! the big fat pokemon like troll thing LOL.
this song needs a little more mastering, its a little static and clashy.
the harmonies and melody ar so playfully magical! well done! WOW!
thank you so much for bringing this idea back to life! well done!
POM POKO! will destroy the universe with their ballsacks! you must obey the sack! it dominates all of us!
please make Pom Poko. :D

darphfluffy responds:

i said it was a rough mix didn't i?

[Canon Dance Remix #2]

canon... oh dear. LOL

it is nice without the beat and synths.
HOWEVER! this is your interpretation, and it is fantastic. Although i prefer the original i have not right to let that influence my score or review.
VEry nice. although minimal. perhaps lacking some kind of harmony? vocal samples...very basic danc version. but reall kick ass feel to it. full of attitude and very merry. well done. have 9! yay! and 5/5. however i feel you need to change it around themiddle... adding something else? taking something away. I dont know. its not my music.
Well done. and thanks alot.

Charmanzer responds:

i know what you mean, it's just that my inspiration were -10 this week ;P i don't know if i'll continue on this song, i prefer making own songs :) thanks for your support anyways! :D

[Worst Fucking Song Ever Made]

Actually

I like it!

It sound like an electronic yodel. LOL. you must be good at maths. hmmm.... Quantum music eh? perhaps the only song ever made that can actually effect physical matter? actually make your ears bleed? well. Actually if that where to happen, I would vote 5 and 10! purely because you will have effcted the physical being with just sound.
I think it is hilarious. Well done. :D:D:D

midimachine responds:

This guy knows talent when he hears it.

[Pissed off Piano player]

Downloaded much? LOL

wow. i dont beleive this has been downloaded so much! LOL. well who cares lol.
I hope that isnt you playing! LOL. you seem very good at music in your other songs. . :D:D:D

ForNoReason responds:

lol yeah, Im not sure WHY its downloaded that much lol. No thats not me playing. I think I used FL to make that lol. Thanks.

[PrEmoEffect - Kaleidoscope]

O.M.G

not good enough? WTF! FTW? this is FREAKIN SWEET!master it all you like! this is kick ass! with or without! so dreamy and epic!

Legend. :D:D:D

PrEmoEffect responds:

sweet, thanks for positive feedback

[A Voice Acting Demo?]

cartoon voices?

completely not neccesary! you are hilarious! your voice is smart! i want your voice in a flash. I will PM YOU! I FUCKIN MEAN IT! you are legend. wait till i post my pokemon parody and check it out! then it will be your descision whether or not your to good for it. Would you like me to PM you?
I definately think you are fucking hilarious.
Seriously, i am crying! A MAN FUCKING CRYIN! no i am not high. i am pissin myself. You read things around you very well. :D:D:D
I will vote 5 every fuckin day for you! SMART!

ForNoReason responds:

lol thanks! Glad you enjoyed and go ahead and PM me.

[Kid Song (MAC9 - comp)]

very lovely.

i must submit something TOO! yayness for the competition!

Xenoscape responds:

yes. of course - more childrens song plz.