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Stalagmite

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WELL. thank you for the invite. ^_^

I give you 5 points because half the battle is having the gonads to get your voice heard. but the other half is always the hardest to obtain. you have the basic structure of performing accents but you should listen to all of these accents alot more, and practice them until you really have them down to a T. the challenge with voice acting is ensuring your voice is full and rich with energy, that is enough to constantly grasp the attention of the listener. to do this you need to have a dynamic range, (you didnt really do high or low voices in this demo, just same voice, different accents. (there are places in the throat you can access to create more voice effects and vocal impressions ) you could have more volume tampering, that is changing the volume of your voice naturally. E.G. why did all of your charcters jusr say there lines? why didnt some whisper as though they where scared, or maybe some where religious, some where bigguted, a few where really energetic. some can be annoying. you have some accents down well, like your japanese and I like your hispanic and latino type ones. if your trying to make your demo interesting make it shorter, (about a minute is reccomended) funnier (write more humurous characters with personality, not just accents saying what would typically be said in a dull situation) and make it stand out! Shout and scream, give us something to laugh at. most people on NG are afraid to speak out loud and voice act with some bollocks because "mum might hear". that is many peoples problem. so just voice act whilst mum is away. thats what i do ^_^

X3 keep up the good efforts! where my critique is somewhat direct and clinical my intentions are purely to help, as you asked me for it :) it does not mean you have produced crap. it just means i am eager to push you forward! :3 keep up the good work! and keep me updated on your future submissions reguarding voice acting. there arent enough of us out there! peace out! :D

NICE!

nice! lovely voice, interesting lyrics :P love the chord pattern X3 really eery but romantic :) a real feel good song man! well done !

GLOWSTICKS AT THE READY!

this makes me wanna pound super-rhythms into the ground with some hard smashing hat fondling breast enhancing action. POUND IT!

nice work, music never smelt so great! :P

Yayonaise!

EXCELLENT! man, you really have a flare for so much! Voice acting, music AND artwork :P well your pretty much an inspiration pal ;) keep up the great work, this is evil and deliciously MONSTrOUS xX3 i imagine mario being tortured to this for some reason :P great work!

AMTRAX91 responds:

Thank you Stalagmite ^_^

LOL!

i got it almost immediately lol, its very creative, very funny, and well acted! i have to say the pacing is a little slow, but overall it is very well thought out!

LOL! i just heard 3:30 Hahaha! it keeps getting better! LOL! excellent fatty! X3

i love this man! very very funny! well written! the voices are quite good but a little samey together,
great work! :D

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

Thanks there Stalagmite, now stop being a whore and post your animations to NG! >:)

its fairly chill X3

the song is nice, a little minimal, but then it is hard to achieve minimal and have it sound good, but you achieved very close to what i would expect from a proffesional track. it is deep and full, the wonderful chords and traditional beat and style instruments. its nice and some lovely ideas! excellent work mate, your a fantastic musician X3

mjattie responds:

thanks a lot Stalagmite!!! You said some nice words!

did you died?

wow.... you could play off keyboard cat.

NICE-NICE-BABEH!

this is smooth, my personal preference of ambience is normally more musically and melodically more inclined, but i think you imply a nice simplicistic melodic structure in this. :D this has enough depth for me to establish good power and to effect my mind. it is deep and powerful definately. i can feel alot of the emotion and stuff beind this, and so you have accomplished alot that oi would expect within an ambient song X3 good job fat kid! to improve, simply practice more, you can only get better X3

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

Only cool people use X3 as a face. X3

It actually was VERY melodically inclined. The synths and pads are really complex, with over 500 notes! D: I played around with different notes and synths and combined them together until I found ones that fit. the real acomplishment was making the instruments, because reflecting my emotions through a computer instrument is hard heh. you know, dragging around bars and moving fake knobs on my screen makes it hard to really know what the outcome will be like. It took me forever to make that wind sound heh.

GENIUS!!!

EXCELLENT! its about time you where noticed! LOL! congrats on daily 1st! hahahaha!

ForNoReason responds:

THANKS!!! I give you full credit! No real reason why...

BOW- WOW!

Excellent work! it sounds pretty hilarious, wll, absolutely brought the hearty guffaws to my face if i am honest. :D
very impressive as a song, and an acapella. it is well done and sounds lovely!
i wish i had auto tuner for my acapellas ^ ^

hardtoplease responds:

haha hearty guffaws indeed :D Cheers!

i love cartoons more than you. they're totally Bonerific :D:D:D

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