this is not very original
HOWEVER... i do like this, particularly the melody. it sounds very "electric bounce" This is not a bad song. it difenately has a comp game feel to it. to improve, additions can be made. Such as more backing sounds. or additional melodies. Also. this is quite a happy composition. Try dramatically changing the mood to angry for a few bars...just for something different.. then change back to your main melody. This will keep it original and interesting. My fav. bit is the beggining instrument. "bells" i think it is. well done :D p.s. 5/5