well.
you have a fantastic voice. it is only a shame it seems so disorganised. you worked hard on the script it seems??? so why cant i hear where they are each saying. i understand it is the emphasis on a chaotic family life. but even i stop to breath sometimes lol.
none the less, you seem to redeem yourself. i am really overwhelmed by your incredibly range. i know i will be leaving a pleasant judgement for you. :D well done and good luck :D TURTLES!