wowza!
very good .LOL. thoroughly enjoyed this one. I like the one that sounds like a burp LOL.
good build of tension then breaking the cake with comical voices and ideas.
good enjoyable experience. Can you do any imitations of homer simspon,
or earth worm jim? if the answer is yes. we may benifit from a chat! check out my blog for more info. :D
well done. truly impressed
you need new instruments.
i just heard your newer song. Where the faires play.
this sounds very similar. try using better instruments. Their is nothing wrong melodically or harmony with this piece. although its structure is a bit weak. wel. keep it up. i look forward to hearing a song you have really worked hard on. (please let me know matey) :D
Totally will once i get a program on my comp for music. These are made with a phone when i bored. But i promise ill make something better :3
hmmm..
the piece may have had more effect if i could hear it over the hi hats "swish and ting"
i kind of got the idea. but i dont think you thought it through. well done for trying. and keep working on it. you clearly have an understanding of musical structure and chords. Just practice executing your knowledge into actual song form. well done though.
Yeah i did this on a phone music maker. So i really wasnt expecting much
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i will give you a break too. and vote 10. and 5/5. this is because you are new and need some support. however, I must emphasise you take in and fully absorb all the information that the reviewer below (mkie nedachi) has said. Newgrounds people are very responsive, in a bad way. They say what they think. and they WONT be gentle. post music that you are SURE is worth the time of someone listening too. If you are not sure about a song. Dont post it. Ask someone else on NG to listen to it privately. then ask them for how to improve.
I myself am a musician too. and i understand basic musical structure, harmonics and melodics. though you have no idea what they are, you should find out. As you dont just need to understand your FL studios, to make good music. You need ot understand music itself.
please PM me for any info you may need. :D
P.S. your music needs improvement.
it has several riffs playing out of key to eachother, and clashes.
I do like the beat though.
Try adding more DIFFERENT things to it.
whether they be instruments, NEW riffs or a new rhythm.
Well done on your first try. and look after your self here.
Will do it, too! :D
used for what?
i do not deny this is an unusual instrument...effect... i dont know lol.
and i am sure if you made this sound, you are technically quite good. I look forward to seeing an actual song being made out of this. but i am disapointed someone has posted up a single looped riff. i would love to hear the final version. but not half a % of it. please tell me when you have completed this. I will gladly listen matey.
Thanks alot. P.S. your synth is wicked.
it was right in front of me! lol
QUITE A CLASSICAL PIECE. i was whining that you should try produciing a classical piece. but this is lovely. and will suffice for me.
I love it. I love it i love it. SO unusual. and weirdly appropriate for odd games.
Your use of that Oriental instrument is great. I love it all. It reminds me a bit of spyro the dragon. :D JOLLY GOOD SHOW! very impressed. More layers are always a good thing. It could be thickened out a bit more with other instruments. (obviously fitting to the other instruments.) well done mr scientist! 10/10 5/5. and Favourited
Thank you very much :o).
I have to admit this was one of my newest creations, therefore it was a little more refined than my usual old submittions. However, it wasn't too serious because I didn't have enough time to create it [ I was supposed to study for an exam ;o) ].
Thank you VERY much for the awesome scores + favourite!
everything is great! excluding the tamberine...
tamberines are the oldest trick in the dance book. and they are awful LOL. next it is claps though. so avoid those to. :D
Anyways! i love this piece. If it had no tamberines, it would be in my favourites. seriously.
I love your synths. and your harmonics in this piece are truly epic. Veyr unusual. VERY sci fi! you have some good ideas. none the less I am still waiting for you to produce a classical piece!
LOL. Yeah, I must agree. When I heard this song after a few days I noticed a few problems and one of these was that the tamberine had NOTHING to do with Sci-Fi.
"you have some good ideas" :
Thanks! The problem is that what I have in mind sometimes seems pretty cool, but then I have problems in creating it EXACTLY. Maybe one day I'll be able to ;o).
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sorry. i do not like this one. I like the idea of the pitch bend in the guitar synth. but i do not like the feel of this piece. it sounds very simple for you.
Im a sad bunny! :b
perhaps to improve make additions with other instruments. You appear to have an understanding of melodics and harmonics. Why not try for an orchestral piece. When you have done it. I would love to hear it! :D
No problem. I really appreciate honest reviews.
Thank you very much for the "understanding in melodics and harmonics"! I have no real musical background so this is quite flattering to me ;o).
I'm VERY interested in doing something more "orchestral", but I don't think I have enough knowledge. I might give it a try, though.
Cheers
i see LOL. are you a physicist?
very unusual. certainly has that "out their" feel. impressing the idea of space and time very well i say. Jolly good show!
again, a little repetitive. not to heavy on the trance idea though. its more of a chillin dance tune. :D which i love so no problems there! Perhaps to help you capture the idea of time and space, you could add better delays or heavier reverbs to symbolise these things. also maybe some odd sounds thrown in their.
It is quite " out their" as i said. But it could definately improve. LOL. thanks alot for this. :D
Hmm... focus on delays and reverbs. Ok :o).
Yeah, I understand what you mean with the "odd sounds thrown in there" part, but I'm always afraid that I make a song become cheesy.
"thanks alot for this :D" <- thanks alot for your review ;o)
i love cartoons more than you. they're totally Bonerific :D:D:D
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