Stalagmite's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Riding the Setting Sun]

oh.

sorry. i do not like this one. I like the idea of the pitch bend in the guitar synth. but i do not like the feel of this piece. it sounds very simple for you.
Im a sad bunny! :b
perhaps to improve make additions with other instruments. You appear to have an understanding of melodics and harmonics. Why not try for an orchestral piece. When you have done it. I would love to hear it! :D

SFaPiL2 responds:

No problem. I really appreciate honest reviews.

Thank you very much for the "understanding in melodics and harmonics"! I have no real musical background so this is quite flattering to me ;o).

I'm VERY interested in doing something more "orchestral", but I don't think I have enough knowledge. I might give it a try, though.

Cheers

[The Fourth Dimension]

i see LOL. are you a physicist?

very unusual. certainly has that "out their" feel. impressing the idea of space and time very well i say. Jolly good show!
again, a little repetitive. not to heavy on the trance idea though. its more of a chillin dance tune. :D which i love so no problems there! Perhaps to help you capture the idea of time and space, you could add better delays or heavier reverbs to symbolise these things. also maybe some odd sounds thrown in their.
It is quite " out their" as i said. But it could definately improve. LOL. thanks alot for this. :D

SFaPiL2 responds:

Hmm... focus on delays and reverbs. Ok :o).

Yeah, I understand what you mean with the "odd sounds thrown in there" part, but I'm always afraid that I make a song become cheesy.

"thanks alot for this :D" <- thanks alot for your review ;o)

[The Dre@m]

hm...(interested-sounding "hm")

very chillin. yet again! lol. maybe you dont need alot in this song. minimalism etc is always good. :D im enjoyin it very much. I like the intro. but unfortunately my speakers are busted! so they kept fuzzing when it got good! none the less. you are not deducted anything for that reason :D
What you have is lovely. Truly moody and atmospheric. lovely mixture of instruments too :D well done.
P.S. chord changes could...well.... Change more.

SFaPiL2 responds:

More chord changes... got it ;o). It shouldn't be too hard I think. Thanks!

[No Seatbelt]

LOL!

WOW! this piece sounds dangerous... makes me feel insecure, worried and unsure of whats to come.... JUST LIKE NOT WEARING A SEATBELT! LOL. you captured the idea really well! so jolly good dhow old bean!
It has a slight "aphex twin" influence perhaps? lol. Very glitch! i like it.
P.S. if not wearing a seat belt inspired you to make this song... PUT A BELT ON NEXT TIME! LOL. OR you will be making a song with sound effects of your broken bones smashing against window panes LOL!
gross... Well thanks alot!

[chucknks2]

wow!

i know you are a talented animator, singer and musician.. i never made much of your random animations, but this... this is original and georgious. well done on this old bean. :D

[Promise (Forgotten)]

i think we have a talent here.

i have reviewed your other songs 10 out of ten 5 out of five. WHY?
listen. work it out.
This is your basic stuff eh?
YOU tell me when you bring in this complex stuff then mate and im their like a moth to the flame!
WOW! you have captured a real emotion in this piece. very innocent, but almost with a twist of insecurity. It does have a slight startlit quality, and it is very uplifting. Truly the best one yet. if you have to improve anything. work on this one. and really blow me away.

[BloodyTears(BeastMix)]

Aaaah... Memories LOL

jolly spiffing marvellous old bean! really daunting and holds a real hypnotic quality. very comp game good sir. I really like this tune. Well done in this.. truly deep... i mean for a computer game LOL. :D

[FF7Prelude(PianoMix)]

a beautiful piano piece!

I made a remix of it LOL. but its shit.. i dont think ill submit it.. YOU HOWEVER, have the ideas nailed to a pin sir!
Is this a midi file though? not a problem, coz people dont care lol, they just want the tunage... well. um... GOOD JOB -buddy budweiser! . im gonna listen to your other stuff now!
P.s. thanks for you comment on my "fluffsy the sheep" song. :D

[Silent nightmare 2]

good song... bad theme LOL

I HATE MADNESS. BUT THIS IS WELL SMART! LOVE THE CHOICE OF INSTRUMENTS. A;THOUGH IT STARTED A LITTLE WEAK. NONE THE LESS. ITS JUST REDEEMED ITSELF! YAY!

[FL Studio Inferno]

TRULY UNUSUAL!

weirdness and random.....if this song was a person, it would be a weird and random person who likes making songs about weird and random things lol.
But no. very unusual approach. i am unsure of its genre. and its holds many odd dischords, which empower the piece with energy. truly a Splendid piece. Perfect for animations about electronics and mechanical things. IDEAL! infact! jolly spiffing marvellous old chap! well done! and the fade at the end is great! it washes out really nicely, washing off the listeners musical pallete. refreshing and original. GOOD JOB! make more!

Timraband responds:

Thank you very much man.

Thanks for the support in this tough times. :P New channel, new songs, no scores, no fans, no nothing, but we'll get through it all. Thank you again for all the support.