um. okay then.
right. sorry to say, but the piece is all over the place, and the drum does not add any extra quality to the piece. and since it has no established rhythm, it appears to be just an annoyance. but your Keyboard is nice. you propably play. at the beggining the synth melody is quite good, but it doesnt really suit the piece. i think you have the makings of a good musician. you just need practice and a basic knowledge of song structures. have a listen around, and try to acknowledge how and where different sounds come in, and whether they sound right to you. Thanks alot my friend. :D